Thursday 10 September 2020

the race descriptive writing

 


I see kids running in the wet stinky mud. It is freezing cold. Lots of trees behind them, parents watching them while the kids run. The kids jump over a big log. Parents and little kids are shivering they would drink hot milo. Some parents have long sleeves, the runners are getting muddy and cold, it is very chilly outside some parents don’t have jackets. I feel bad for the people who were running around the place, it’s like there in a swamp. Parents cheering for their kids making them go faster it might be winter there that’s why the parents are wearing jackets. It started spitting and the race is almost done, just one more lap to go one boy is coming to touch the finish line “we have a winner!” the teacher said. The boy was proud of himself, also his parents, he felt awesome.



Conclusion 

I feel bad for them because they ran in the mud. I wouldn’t go there because it looked wet