It was a snowy day until I saw a big eruption coming from the volcano. I was going to explore the volcano and saw flickering lighting coming out of the smoke, it was coming from the volcano it was scary but cool because I could see a face forming because of the smoke and the lava bubbling under me I saw snow meltdown from the volcano, the flaming hot fire hit me and it felt like a flaming hot Cheeto and luckily there was a bit of snow unmelted, that was close, I continued exploring the volcano when I looked at the smoke I could see an owl face the stars were in the sky keeping a distance from the volcano erupting the volcano kept on rising the fire until it was full I kinda saw a beasty creature coming out and I actually heard a loud noise coming from the bottom of the volcano I ran back home to hide. I was still scared to go out because there was a lot of rumbling out there, I don’t know what to do though. Should I grab a gun? Yes, let's go get my dads ak 47 to beat the beasty creature I ran to get some ammo so I don’t run out so quickly now let’s go outside and shoot the creature boom! boom! The gun goes i”m about to run out of ammo, I ran back to the house to the last box of ammo that’s it I ran out of ammo and I defeated the mysterious creature “phew! That was hard” I said. Now we can go home and rest
Buddy Comment: Rayyan
I like how you used different vocabulary and punctuation
