The time I went to the Los Angeles Lakers basketball game.

 The time I went to the Los Angeles Lakers basketball game. 

It was Saturday and my dad bought two tickets to the Lakers basketball game. I was excited because I never went to a basketball court or a game so I got ready and went to the basketball arena. It was huge, I saw my favourite basketball player Anthony Davis, he was the best player in his team he scored so many baskets, as soon as the first quarter ended. I and my dad decided to get ice cream.

The second quarter started and the Celtics were catching up to the Lakers score. It was a very close match because both teams were good, Anthony Davis was sitting down on his chair because he had to take a break. He came back from his break and was on fire, he scored so many points, I finished eating my ice cream when I finished my ice cream I heard a sound. It was the slam dunk! Lebron James slammed the ball into the hoop. 

Lebron jumped so high that he slammed it. “That was amazing!” I shouted to my dad. Anthony Davis scored a three-pointer by the corner, there was nobody to guard him so he shot and got it in the hoop it was so fast I couldn’t see the net on the ring move, that is called a swish, a swish is when you shoot a ball and it doesn’t touch the edges.  

          

the hydrosphere

Earth is made up of four different spheres, they are the geosphere, hydrosphere, biosphere, and atmosphere.

In this explanation, I'm going to tell you how the hydrosphere works.

We need water to stay hydrated or otherwise, we would be extinct. Without water. Animals and plants won’t be alive and the animals will die. The water comes from underground and goes around the earth. The water will come underground then it goes to the pacific ocean.

The hydrosphere is one of the most important spheres in the world. Auckland is in a water shortage so we need to save water. you need to have water so there's plenty for everyone. 

Every sphere is important because they all relate to the earth. We need water to stay alive so we won't get extinct. 

Conclusion

The hydrosphere is important to us, plants, trees, and animals. 

feedback

Teo

  I Like the writing 

I like the Things u said about the Hydrosphere and we could die if we don’t have any water

Karlos

Use more sentence starters and I like how you used full stops.

  

  

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