Cell phones and drivers

I reckon not to use cell phones while driving because it will cause an accident . You can only put music on but not texting and calling while a baby is with the adult the baby will cry forever would you do that if you were an adult? I hope you won’t because do you wanna die because of that thing. I wouldn’t do that if i was you would i?. If you go on your phone and look at the road and back to your phone you will be too dizzy and you’ll crash into somebody or something and you will die to your death and never come back to life. That’s the end of your life but that’s not all about phones and driver i’m still writing but if you do that you will die I’m telling you you will die. I want a phone but i don’t want to bring it with me because i might crash and never come back and i want to live not die i like my life and i don’t want to die. Adults should be band from phones when there driving cause they will die.This shouldn't happen in new zealand because if it does then lots of people in new zealand will die and a little bit of people will be left and everything will be quiet and it will never happen again but one thing it’s a rule never ever go on a cell phone while driving.

 Brent i like how your trying really hard to persuade people to not use cell phones while driving but to improve your writing you should get more ideas by Sauviri.