AMONG US MOVIE

The time I went to the Los Angeles Lakers basketball game.

 The time I went to the Los Angeles Lakers basketball game. 

It was Saturday and my dad bought two tickets to the Lakers basketball game. I was excited because I never went to a basketball court or a game so I got ready and went to the basketball arena. It was huge, I saw my favourite basketball player Anthony Davis, he was the best player in his team he scored so many baskets, as soon as the first quarter ended. I and my dad decided to get ice cream.

The second quarter started and the Celtics were catching up to the Lakers score. It was a very close match because both teams were good, Anthony Davis was sitting down on his chair because he had to take a break. He came back from his break and was on fire, he scored so many points, I finished eating my ice cream when I finished my ice cream I heard a sound. It was the slam dunk! Lebron James slammed the ball into the hoop. 

Lebron jumped so high that he slammed it. “That was amazing!” I shouted to my dad. Anthony Davis scored a three-pointer by the corner, there was nobody to guard him so he shot and got it in the hoop it was so fast I couldn’t see the net on the ring move, that is called a swish, a swish is when you shoot a ball and it doesn’t touch the edges.  

          

the hydrosphere

Earth is made up of four different spheres, they are the geosphere, hydrosphere, biosphere, and atmosphere.

In this explanation, I'm going to tell you how the hydrosphere works.

We need water to stay hydrated or otherwise, we would be extinct. Without water. Animals and plants won’t be alive and the animals will die. The water comes from underground and goes around the earth. The water will come underground then it goes to the pacific ocean.

The hydrosphere is one of the most important spheres in the world. Auckland is in a water shortage so we need to save water. you need to have water so there's plenty for everyone. 

Every sphere is important because they all relate to the earth. We need water to stay alive so we won't get extinct. 

Conclusion

The hydrosphere is important to us, plants, trees, and animals. 

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I like the Things u said about the Hydrosphere and we could die if we don’t have any water

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the volcano eruption

 It was a snowy day until I saw a big eruption coming from the volcano. I was going to explore the volcano and saw flickering lighting coming out of the smoke, it was coming from the volcano it was scary but cool because I could see a face forming because of the smoke and the lava bubbling under me I saw snow meltdown from the volcano, the flaming hot fire hit me and it felt like a flaming hot Cheeto and luckily there was a bit of snow unmelted, that was close, I continued exploring the volcano when I looked at the smoke I could see an owl face the stars were in the sky keeping a distance from the volcano erupting the volcano kept on rising the fire until it was full I kinda saw a beasty creature coming out and I actually heard a loud noise coming from the bottom of the volcano I ran back home to hide. I was still scared to go out because there was a lot of rumbling out there, I don’t know what to do though. Should I grab a gun? Yes, let's go get my dads ak 47 to beat the beasty creature I ran to get some ammo so I don’t run out so quickly now let’s go outside and shoot the creature boom! boom! The gun goes i”m about to run out of ammo, I ran back to the house to the last box of ammo that’s it I ran out of ammo and I defeated the mysterious creature “phew! That was hard” I said. Now we can go home and rest

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the race descriptive writing

 

I see kids running in the wet stinky mud. It is freezing cold. Lots of trees behind them, parents watching them while the kids run. The kids jump over a big log. Parents and little kids are shivering they would drink hot milo. Some parents have long sleeves, the runners are getting muddy and cold, it is very chilly outside some parents don’t have jackets. I feel bad for the people who were running around the place, it’s like there in a swamp. Parents cheering for their kids making them go faster it might be winter there that’s why the parents are wearing jackets. It started spitting and the race is almost done, just one more lap to go one boy is coming to touch the finish line “we have a winner!” the teacher said. The boy was proud of himself, also his parents, he felt awesome.

Conclusion 

I feel bad for them because they ran in the mud. I wouldn’t go there because it looked wet      

the time my little brother ate chili

the time my little brother ate chili

 My family was eating dinner, my mum told me to set the table. My brother really wanted candy, he thought that the chili was candy because it was red. I told my brother that it was chilli not candy but he didn’t listen to me.

He ate it and his face was red and I gave him water and he said that it was my fault and I said “you’re the one who didn’t listen to me.” My brother was crying again so my mum gave candy so he stopped crying but when we were actually eating dinner he didn’t want to eat.

My mum told him to eat but he didn't. I finished eating (my food is chicken and rice). I put my plate in the sink and I carried my brother to the table but he refused to eat and ran away. When I chased after him, he locked the door behind him. I called my mum to open the door. She grabbed her keys from her room and opened the door. My brother said “I will eat if you stop chasing me.” So he ate dinner and after he ate he fell asleep.

Now you know why little siblings cry a lot, hope you enjoyed my narrative writing.

how do banks work?

  How do banks work?

Introduction How do banks work?

Have you ever wanted to know what a bank is? Banks have been all around the world for thousands of years but do you know what they can do? They give you money and will give 2 percent of your money and that’s called interest. The bank borrows money from you, they agree to make a payment so you can get more money. Oh and by the way I didn’t tell you about a bank account. A bank account is when you keep the money. The bank keeps the money in a vault so nobody can steal it, a vault has a lock to protect it from getting stolen. When you get money from the bank the bank gives your money to somebody else and there’s this card that you can spend on because it’s saved in your bank account.

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Sometimes the bank pays you money and 2 percent interest so you get more of the money you're getting, you can deposit money in your bank account, after that the bank will lend money to you, piggy banks can’t fit all your money that’ why there's a bank account a credit card needs a pin number up to 4 because if somebody steals it they will be able to spend anything. There are different kinds of banks in NZ (Anz, Asb,Bnz, Westpac and TSB).

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Money is very important because if you didn’t you wouldn’t have food, it has been over a thousand years even in the 1900s, for example, you want $100 and you get $102 because of the 2 percent interest.

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You get money from jobs and helping your parents almost every day, I get five dollars because I help my mum and dad do things, maybe you should help your parents so you can earn money to buy things.

         

Conclusion 

Now you know how banks work I hope you do help your parents and earn money for yourself         

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A trip to the Philippines

A trip to the Philippines 

I was in the airport so I could go on my flight to the Philippines the flight was in one hour, I was excited to go on the plane, it was my first time on a plane, I got to eat on the plane and watch a movie on the iPad it took so long to fly it took an hour to set it up, finally, it took off, my brothers were already sleeping and I was like “don’t sleep!!!!!” We can watch a movie.

After two days we arrived in the Philippines. It was already hot there. First I visited my grandma, then to my cousins, grandpa, and my other grandma, I was there for two weeks. We went to the swimming pool and the beach. My cousin and I made sandcastles and swam on the beach.

I was getting ready to swim after I finished swimming. We had to go back home when I was back  I gave my cousin a PS4, he liked he said thank you I was helping him set up the Ps4 so we could play. After two hours we finished the setup and now we could play Call of duty black ops4. I was happy that I was in the Philippines so I couldn't be bored at home. I was hot after swimming on the beach but I still had lots of fun. I was getting sleepy when I was playing on the PS4, I slept first then I played again. But I played on my computer because I was getting bored with the PS4, I was watching on my laptop. 

We went out to see what was going on in the city, we went to Mcdonalds to eat then we went on a blue tricycle with seats on the back (motorcycle was blue) it was so cool to go on one of those so it was easier, there were no traffic lights there so everybody just drove it was busy so we had to wait a long time, I was getting so sleepy so I slept for a while we were waiting and I said this “hurry up already!!!” then we went, it took a long time to go.

When I woke up we were in my grandad’s farm with chickens, I carried one of them and they were so fluffy, her name was Sarah she was still a baby so I carried her softly. I got really hungry luckily there was food, there was donut’s, pie’s and a sandwich, I ate all of the food on the table I got really full.

After two weeks I went back to Auckland.

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The time I got a scar

The time I got a scar

When my mum was pregnant with me, she had chickenpox and while I was inside her womb, I was infected with it. That’s why I was born with one blind eye. I always have a hard time straightening my head because I need to use my good eye. 

But good news is, the doctors can fix it. Although it will always be blind, they can do something to make it open. I just need to decide when I want to do it. I think I will do it when I’m 16 or older. I want to do it at 16 or 18 years old because I can get really nervous.

I am happy that my friends and the kids in my school don't think any less of me. My family also says that I am extra special because I can do whatever anyone else can do, sometimes even more. 

I think other kids like me can do anything. You just need to be confident and proud of yourself. With me, I want to be a basketball player so I can get stronger and better just like other kids are.

Having one blind eye is not too bad. If you think of it, it could have been worse. That’s why I am still thankful and I’m not gonna let this stop me from following my dreams. 

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the time I swapped my brother for a bike

Do you feel like your brother is getting annoying? 

This is the time I swapped my brother for a bike. I saw somebody with a bike and I asked him if he wanted to swap my brother for his bike and I said “do you want my minion toy or one other toy?” He said, “can I look at your family members ?” He looked at them and said “I wanna take him” I said, “ can I have the bike now?” I was on my new bike.

  I saw him give my brother to someone else and I was mad so I told him to give it back and then the next day he tried doing it again I was getting annoyed by him. I think he wanted to swap with me because he didn’t want his bike, this time I ignored him and did a wheelie (i almost fell) he was giving him to the same person!

 I was getting tired of him so I sneakily took the brother back while he was doing something else and ran off with my brother in between my legs, my brother was about to fall but I held him by the shirt.


                                                                             to be continued 

Why big brothers are helpful

Why  big brothers are helpful 

The reason I chose this speech is that I love my older brothers. I love them because they care for you whenever you’re injured. They help you with a question that is hard at home, you can ask them to get something that’s high and they’ll help you score a point at basketball. 

They play with you when you're lonely and they give you a piggyback, they always play video games with you. They buy you anything you want. You can tell them to do something and they’ll do it. That's why having older siblings is awesome and cool. They make you laugh whenever you’re sad and lonely.

They accept all the challenges you tell them to do and they’ll do it. They make fun games to play (outside or inside) and they always buy me anything. They like to do different silly dances.

The most important thing is to love your older siblings and they’ll love you too. They will do anything for you. They let you play on their consoles every day for one full hour and they let you watch Netflix every time you get bored and you go on their consoles. That’s why I love my older siblings because they do things for you.

They do embarrassing things when we’re at the mall. I like to have my siblings, they let you play video games and whenever I verse them they always get competitive. Yet I still win, they do anything for me and I will do anything for them. The best thing is they care for you, even if you don’t like them they’ll always be with you. Cause you have the same blood.

I like to watch movies with them because it's more fun than just watching by yourself. I love to spend a lot of time with my brothers because they don’t do anything busy or anything. Having big brothers is amazing to have because they are always fun to play with.

Would you like to have older siblings? Do you have one? If you do have fun with them. There you go, now you know how big siblings are like. 

       

        

       

The stone that looked like a giant

The stone that looked like a giant 

It was another rainy day at the palace, birds chirping in the trees. While I was going to get food, I saw a big stone that looked like a person trying to take shelter and coming out of the ground was frightening. I climbed up the palace, it was there since I got here I was freaked out the first time I saw it. The stone dashed to me while I stood still. My lawn was still okay but some of it was ripped into pieces.

I was frustrated with this stone. It was annoying and wasted my time getting food. “Mum! There’s a stone in front of our palace!” I called out the window I tried hitting it with my axe but it just broke, “what would we do mum?” “I asked just leave it alone it will go away later,” my mum said.

1 month later 

Finally, the monster went away now I can go to the shops to buy some more food.

Now that the monster has gone we can have a peaceful place to live   

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